Edward, your poem beautifully captures the haunting and complex emotions of connection and identity within the LGBTQ+ experience. The imagery of 'numbered faces' and 'vantablack wings' creates a powerful atmosphere, drawing the reader into this midnight realm of shared struggle and intimacy. I especially love how you juxtapose harsh realities with the yearning for love and acceptance, weaving in the idea that even in darkness, there’s a sense of community and resilience. Your language is both lyrical and thought-provoking, making this piece a poignant reflection on the human condition. Thank you for sharing such a compelling work!